LOOKING at the film that ing dan bun created w have a lot of work to do. i think that we shoud reshot the whole first half and ad in transitions. The whole first half was bad because we didn't hve a propper camera. I actuall think our idea is kind of difficult to protray overall. The second half of the movie we need to work on outfits and sitting in the correct restauraunt. the owner of cafe swish would no let us film in the scripted location so we had todouble take in ollies. We have to work on a way to make the scene overal less complicated.

すみません がくせい, わたしたっち の えが will be better next time!

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